Friday, 15 November 2013

Tommo And The General

Christmas is nearly here.  Yes, it is!  At the time of writing it is only erm... 39 days until the big day.  Which - judging by the antics of my local supermarket - means it's practically Easter.

This is a story entered for the The 2013 Post Apocalyptic Book Club Christmas Short Story Competition.  The theme was a Post Apocalyptic Christmas story, based on "A Visit from St. Nicholas" by Clement Clarke Moore - hence the doggerel at the start of the story.  Poetry never really was my forte.

The frozen turkey cannons were a half remembered idea purloined from a long forgotten board game called Sleigh Wars.  The idea of rival Santa Clauses battling it out over the rooftops using festively-themed weaponry was almost too good not to use.  Xmascette, anyone?
                                                                                 

…For outside on the grass was a funny wee chap,
Dressed in army fatigues and a little pointy cap
He begged ‘Let me in, Sir, and to the cellar make haste
Before The General attacks, laying your village to waste!’

It was dark, yet cosy – almost festive – in the cellar.  The children had had a few of their friends over for ghost stories yesterday evening, so there were plenty of blankets and snacks to go round.   As we settled, the little man seated himself next to the Hurricane lamp and introduced himself.  His voice was quiet and nervous.

’Thank you, kind Sir, kind Madam!  Thank you indeed for allowing me to take shelter in my hour of need!   My name is Tommo, and yes, erm…  I’m an elf.  Until half an hour ago I was a private in The General’s army helping with his seasonal offensive but then I erm…  Accidentally forgot to get back on the sleigh.  You see…  And The General doesn’t like elves who... Forget to get back on their sleighs.’  He grabbed my arm tightly.  ‘You won’t tell him where I am, will you?’

‘Don’t worry, old chap!’ I replied cheerfully.  (I’m always a bit effusive when I’m merry.)  ‘I understand completely.  Christmas Eve is jolly hard work for the likes of you.  I don’t mind you staying here a while to get some rest.  I’m sure Old St. Nick won’t miss you for a couple of hours.’

Tommo’s face grew ashen.  ‘If I was still working for The Old Man, then I would agree with you.  …But The General is in charge now and all the other Santas are trying to overthrow him and it’s Christmas Eve and…  WHY WON’T ANYONE THINK OF THE CHILDREN?’

‘I’m sorry?  Other Santas? ’ I queried.

‘Oh…  There’s lots of Santas now.  There’s Banality Claus, Anti Claus, Auntie Claus, Sancti Claus, Indemnity Claus … Lots of them.’

‘Really?  When did that happen?’

‘Well…  The Old Man came into money when Coca Cola set up that sponsorship deal.  No more making wooden toys for him!   He invested wisely and made a ton of money.  Then his wife Mary ran off with Black Peter.  That was not a good time to be an elf, I can tell you; no-one was on the Nice List that year.  Well, obviously he couldn’t do everything by himself – he wasn’t getting any younger after all - so instead of getting some new hires in, he decided to buy up a biotechnology company and got them investigating erm…  cloning and cybernetic augmentation.  Soon he had a whole army of Santas, just like him.  Well, almost like him.  They could do cool stuff like supersonic flight, high precision present throwing from sleighs, time dilation – all sorts.  Suddenly the workshop was full of jolly fat men, laughing merrily all bloody day long.  You have no idea how…  upsetting that was.  Then the Old Man bought Christmas Island, made it a tax haven and went on holiday, leaving the other Santas to mind the workshop. ‘

‘…Except it didn’t quite work out the way.  You see…  The clones weren’t perfect and they started to develop… quirks.  Most of the Santas were harmless, if a bit, well...  odd.  Like ‘Sancti Claus’ – or ‘Dave’ as he insists on calling himself.  His speciality is the ‘Goat Voucher’.   If you want to see a five year old cry, tell them that some other kid has been given a goat on their behalf and they can never see it.  …But you try telling THAT to Dave.  If you like lectures about the crass commercialism of Christmas and how it is directly responsible for the death of at least a thousand Emperor penguins on an Antarctic ice floe every hour on the hour between Christmas Eve and Boxing Day, then complain about the goat voucher.  Go ahead.  I dare you.’

Tommo looked at me.  I could see that the poor elf had indeed had had words with Dave about goat vouchers.  Many times.

He sighed then continued.  ‘Some of the Santas were a little less, erm… Festive.  Like The General.  He seemed pleasant enough at first, a bit brusque perhaps, but he liked to be in charge and we elves… sort of let him.  We liked being led by someone who looked after himself, someone who didn’t go out in a red dressing gown and keep snacks in his beard. …Even if he does have a bit of a medal fetish.  He's got a crack squad of elves for that, you know, raised on a strict diet of Valerie Singleton, sticky backed plastic, gold top milk bottle tops and ribbon.’

‘…But then he stopped taking orders.  Obviously The Old Man wasn’t happy at all about this, so he got his remaining faithful elves and Santas to make ‘arrangements’.  …And I don’t want to be around when these ‘arrangements’ meet The General.  I’m really, really sorry.  You may want to consider moving in the New Year.  If there is one.’  Tommo curled up under the cellar table and sang ‘Silent Night’ quietly to himself.

--

Ten minutes later there was a loud knocking on the cellar door, followed by someone clearing their throat in anticipation of making an inconsiderate amount of noise.

‘PRIVATE!  …AH SAID PRIVATE!’

Clearly this was someone used to giving orders and having them followed.

‘There’s no-one here,’ whispered Tommo. 

Suddenly there wasn’t a cellar door.  Instead there was an enormous muscled buzz-cut of a man in red, fur-lined army fatigues and mirrored shades.  He raised his voice from a reasonably unfriendly bellow to a slightly less reasonable shriek.

‘GREETINGS, AH SAID, GREETINGS TO YOU MERRY GENTLEMEN!  AH BELIEVE YOU ARE A-HARBORIN’ ONE OF MAH ELVES!’

‘How dare you barge in like that, Sir!’ I countered, finding a hitherto unexpected reserve of courage.  (It must have been that last brandy.)  ‘I kindly yet firmly request that you leave immediately.’

‘DON’T YAH UNNERSTAND ME, BOY?  AHM GENERAL NICOLAS ZEE FER ZACHARIAH CLAUS III, PRESIDENT FAH LIFE OF THE DEMOCRATIC ELVEN REPUBLIC!  AND AHM MISSIN’ AN ELF FROM MAH SLEIGH.  YOU SEEN HIM, HAVE YAH BOY?’

Oh dear.  Hammy overacting is obviously no hindrance to a career in the military.  ...And poor old Tommo - he didn’t stand a chance.  The General grabbed him from his hiding place, bundled him into the hessian sack he was carrying and then threw it over his shoulder.  Then the General turned to me.

‘AH NEED SOMEONE TAH GUIDE MAH SLEIGH.  YOU GOT THE NOSE.  GIT, BOY!’

Well, how could I refuse?

--

Parked outside my house was a sleigh unlike any I had seen before.  Yes, it was big, red, shiny and loaded with presents.  It also had lots of dangerous looking armaments jutting out at inappropriately lethal angles.  And instead of reindeer the sleigh had wings, over-sized jet engines and a complete disregard for how many miles it got to the gallon.  I didn’t think Dave would approve.

The General noted my nervous admiration.

‘BEAUTIFUL, AINT SHE?’  he bellowed.  ‘THE SLEIGHSLAYER 9000 COMES WITH DOUBLE SELF GUIDIN’ FROZEN TURKEY CANNONS, PLUM PUDDIN’ BOMBS AND ADVANCED EGG NOG ANTI AIRCRAFT WEAP’NRY.  AND AH’VE ADDED A LITTLE SOMETHIN’ EXTRA…’  He patted a large squishy globe on the rear of the sleigh – it looked like a Christmas Pudding about the size of a pony.  ‘A LITTLE INSURANCE, IF YOU KNOW WHAT AH MEAN…’ he grinned.

--

The General emptied Tommo out of the sack and instructed him to prepare for attack.  The elf loaded the turkey cannons with Norfolk’s finest then took cover amongst the presents.  He was singing ‘Silent Night’ to himself again; he had the thousand yard stare of someone who had seen far too many Christmas seasons.

Soon we were flying high above the rooftops of the village, flurries of snow swirling seasonally around the heavy artillery.   As a young boy I had dreamed of being on Father Christmas’ sleigh - I had so wanted to experience the magic of this wonderful night first hand.  I wasn’t expecting Foghorn Leghorn crossed with Colonel Kurtz on a flying festive fortress, but…  I was indeed profoundly exhilarated.

The General tapped a glowing panel on the front of the sleigh then snarled…

‘IT’S UP AHEAD, BOY.’

On the outskirts of the village I saw what looked like a young, rather slender woman, only she was roughly 100 feet tall and made of metal.  She was wearing what appeared to be beige undergarments and precious little else.  Being the gentleman I am I tried to avert my eyes, but there was something almost horribly pernicious and compelling about her.   She noticed us then wrenched a fully grown Scots Pine from the ground, roots and all.  Then her hips started to move suggestively.  And her tongue was lolling from left to right, like a bulldog licking an ice cream cone.  Then the singing started…

Dear Reader, I cannot describe the true insanity of the monstrosity I saw before me, quite apart from the fact that I am rapidly running out of words and this is a family friendly story.  Needless to say, her voice was shrill and tuneless, the tongue was like a bloated, elongated slug and her hypnotic hip movements were most unbecoming.  And certainly, to my dying day, I will never, ever be able to admire the arboreal diversity of the Glens without recalling what she did next with that poor tree.

‘THAT, BOY... IS THE TWERKBOT!’ yelled The General.  ‘IT LOOKS LIKE THE OLD MAN IS IN LEAGUE WITH THE MOUSE!’ 

I didn’t understand what he meant, but it can’t have been good.

The General pressed several buttons on the panel.  Three hundred pounds of frozen poultry crashed into the side of the Twerkbot, knocking her off balance and into the Rectory.  The Vicar wasn’t going to like that.  Rising to her feet, the Twerkbot picked up her tree and tried to swat the sleigh.  Again she lost her balance and crashed posterior first into the Village Hall.  The General unleashed more frozen turkey to little effect, followed by a couple of equally ineffective plum pudding bombs.    And so it continued – the Twerkbot would try to hit us with her tree then fall over and we would unleash a volley of Christmas fare, leaving her unscathed.  It occurred to me that, despite being inherently a bit unsteady on her feet, the Twerkbot was utterly impervious to the firepower of the Sleighslayer 9000.

The General had realised this too.  ‘DAMMIT!  AHM GONNA HAVE TO DESTROY CHRISTMAS TAH SAVE IT!’ he bellowed.  He pressed another button on the sleigh.  Nothing happened.  The General climbed over to the back of the sleigh and started pushing against the giant Christmas Pudding with his feet, all the while using language that would make a sailor blush.

Suddenly there was a strong smell of burning brandy and a loud whooshing noise.  Below The General was riding the Christmas Pudding towards the Twerkbot, hollering like a cowboy.

Then everything went white.

--

A few hours later I woke up.  Christmas Morning!

I appeared to be in the cellar.  Except the cellar didn’t have a ceiling. Or walls.   Fortunately my family had sheltered under the cellar table; singed, but otherwise unharmed. 

I examined the blackened remains of my vegetable patch.  There were lumps of charred Christmas pudding everywhere, hissing gently in the traditional festive drizzle.  I realised that this year Christmas dinner wouldn’t be that different after all.

--

Later, a big jolly man in sandals and a red ‘Save The Aardvark’ t-shirt rode up to me on a battered bicycle, smiling expansively. 

‘Helloooo….  Sorry about the garden.  And the village.  And most of the country too I’m afraid.  Never mind, Christmas Pudding is great for growing radishes.  Here – this’ll help with the old post-apocalyptic self-sufficiency thing.  Merry Christmas and remember…  Hoe hoe hoe!’


It was a voucher - for a goat five thousand miles away.

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